"Vishwanath asks Megha to quit her job and marry his son, but she refuses when she hears Vijay's strange condition.".Instead of two sentences, this can be combined into one sentence due to both of them focusing on the same character.ĭone - Nicholas Michael Halim ( talk) 05:48, 15 January 2021 (UTC).She is a hardworking girl struggling to support her family." "Megha is Vishwanath's personal assistant in his office.Removed - Nicholas Michael Halim ( talk) 06:45, 15 January 2021 (UTC) How does he indulge in life's temptations to the extreme?."The pampered Vijay has completed his education and now indulges in life's temptations to the extreme.".
"with mostly critical praise was directed"ĭone - Nicholas Michael Halim ( talk) 05:27, 15 January 2021 (UTC) Plot section."The film received mixed-to-positive reviews".This sentence should be removed entirely per my next point below or it should be made clear that it's not from critics.This should be "The film tells the story".Playing would better as "in supporting roles". "It starred" and "playing supporting roles".
It isn't often that the word banner is used in this way.ĭone - Nicholas Michael Halim ( talk) 05:27, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
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